Writing/superhero writing

In writing recently we have been learning to describe our own made up superhero and describe their powers sidekick arch enemies and their alter ego. Here is a demonstration of my writing                             




                             Gerald The Gummy Bear

Gerald is a gummy bear who lives in a packet with his 103 other brothers, he is the youngest out of all of his brothers. But one day Gerald sees something amazing a hole in the packet! So he runs for the hole and jumps and lands in the bowl of salt, but he doesn't care he just keeps on running until he sees IT! Yes that's right it’s called IT. There was a label on the bottle that clearly said in bold letters DO NOT DRINK! But he drinks it anyway. Just then he comes across Bob the blob, a fat blue blob of jelly Who he was friends with before he got put in the packet.

But then Gerald feels odd and then his flimsy little muscles turn ginormous “wow!” said bob “you grew fast.” Then Bob sees a drop of IT that Gerald had dropped and he drank it and just got fatter and taller. Then Gerald says “Bob will you be my sidekick and help save the world” “yes!” says Bob. And that’s how Gerald the gummy bear and Bob the blob became super hero's.

The powers that Gerald the gummy bear, and Bob the blob have are amazing!

Gerald can copy any super power from a superhero or a villain.Gerald also has amazing X-Ray vision to see through anything when ever he wants.Gerald also has the power to turn invisible giving him the advantage to sneak up on his enemies. Gerald has one last power he can go through walls and doors when he needs to get out of an emergency.

Bob has the power to transform into any animal he wants, first he summons the animal he wants to turn into then he touches it and turns into it. Bob’s other power is breathing underwater for as long as he wants to, giving him the advantage to chase evil jellyfish without losing his breath. Bob's last power is water control he can control any water substance in the nearby area using it to form tsunamis that crush the enemy and floods going up to 100 meters high.

Bob, and Gerald’s arch enemy is Professor Bubble. Professor Bubble has robbed over 1,000 banks. He also has the power to turn into hundreds of little bubble which are very dangerous to everyone except Professor Bubble. Professor Bubble can also go through walls which is an advantage to him when he robs banks. Professor bubble also has very sharp gleaming white teeth.

Professor bubble wears a red banded black top hat with a pure gold monocle with a pure silver chain.

Gerald and Bob were out at the mall one day when they saw Professor Bubble stealing a little boy’s toy from him so Bob and Gerald jump into action and snatch the toy off Professor Bubble and then BANG!, CRASH!, THUMP!, Professor bubble has been defeated and put in prison they return the toy to the little boy and he thanks them and now that the Professor Bubble is gone they can relax. For Now!!